搜狗做题网求批改作文两篇第一篇I have just come back from hainan.Hainan Island is
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求批改作文两篇
第一篇
I have just come back from hainan.Hainan Island is very beautiful.It is second big in China.It is in China south.It is warm all year.There are fresh air,beautiful beach and tall coconut plam trees.If you want there,you can take part in many activities such as surfing scuba diving,swimming,sufing and enjoy sunshine on seaside.Of cause,you can eat all kinds of fruits and seafood.It very good.
My tour is very cool.
第二篇
Bicycles still popular will people in Beijing.Go to school or
go to work by bike is very easy.Now,more and more people have car oneself.It
make city become terrible.Much time wasted on the road.While,take bike can
spare time and keep fit.So I very like bike.Are you?Why?
求批改,最好能把批改的地方的语法点讲一下,
第一篇
I have just come back from hainan.Hainan Island is very beautiful.It is second big in China.It is in China south.It is warm all year.There are fresh air,beautiful beach and tall coconut plam trees.If you want there,you can take part in many activities such as surfing scuba diving,swimming,sufing and enjoy sunshine on seaside.Of cause,you can eat all kinds of fruits and seafood.It very good.
My tour is very cool.
第二篇
Bicycles still popular will people in Beijing.Go to school or
go to work by bike is very easy.Now,more and more people have car oneself.It
make city become terrible.Much time wasted on the road.While,take bike can
spare time and keep fit.So I very like bike.Are you?Why?
求批改,最好能把批改的地方的语法点讲一下,
第一篇：
1.第一行second big,要讲第几大,形容词要用最级,应改为second biggest,且second biggest后缺少宾语island.
2.第2、3、4局为短散句,应把这3局合并为一句,改为It is second biggest island which is located in china south and have warm weather all year in china.
3.第二行末尾,If you want there,综合句意应该是“如果你在那儿”,所以应是If you are traveling there.
4.第四行末尾,It very good这一句缺少谓语,应改为It is very good.
第二篇
1.第一句,句意应为自行车对于北京人来说是很受欢迎的,缺少主语“是”还有莫名其妙地出现了will,所以应改为Bicycles are still popular to people in Beijing.
2.第二句,主语“上学或上班”不应是动词形式,应用非谓语动词中的动名词,所以改为Going to school or going to work by bike is very easy.
3.第三句中的oneself莫名其妙,你是想说“属于他们自己的车”是吗?改为have thier own car不就行了吗!
4.第四句出现了两个谓语make和become,“致使城市变得糟糕”应是make city becoming terrible.
5.第五句应用现在完成时,road并非特指,且时间是被浪费的 所以改为Much time have been wasted on road.
6.倒数第二句,I very like bike,严重错误,like是动词,形容词very不能修饰动词,应用副词修饰动词,I like bike very much.
你的英语还不是一般的差!基础的知识要扎实才行..
1.第一行second big,要讲第几大,形容词要用最级,应改为second biggest,且second biggest后缺少宾语island.
2.第2、3、4局为短散句,应把这3局合并为一句,改为It is second biggest island which is located in china south and have warm weather all year in china.
3.第二行末尾,If you want there,综合句意应该是“如果你在那儿”,所以应是If you are traveling there.
4.第四行末尾,It very good这一句缺少谓语,应改为It is very good.
第二篇
1.第一句,句意应为自行车对于北京人来说是很受欢迎的,缺少主语“是”还有莫名其妙地出现了will,所以应改为Bicycles are still popular to people in Beijing.
2.第二句,主语“上学或上班”不应是动词形式,应用非谓语动词中的动名词,所以改为Going to school or going to work by bike is very easy.
3.第三句中的oneself莫名其妙,你是想说“属于他们自己的车”是吗?改为have thier own car不就行了吗!
4.第四句出现了两个谓语make和become,“致使城市变得糟糕”应是make city becoming terrible.
5.第五句应用现在完成时,road并非特指,且时间是被浪费的 所以改为Much time have been wasted on road.
6.倒数第二句,I very like bike,严重错误,like是动词,形容词very不能修饰动词,应用副词修饰动词,I like bike very much.
你的英语还不是一般的差!基础的知识要扎实才行..
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