搜狗做题网英语短文改错,并修改请修改下列段落,并提供你改好的段落.My hometown is a pretty city,so
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英语短文改错,并修改
请修改下列段落,并提供你改好的段落.
My hometown is a pretty city,so people there are kind and polite.With coming of spring,grass and trees turn green,and flowers grew in many colors.In summer,the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.After autumn arrives,the city looks as an old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter,a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can wait more patiently above the sea for quite a longtime.While they find fish come to the surface,they fly down immediate and catch them without delay.That is my city,and I love it so much.
请修改下列段落,并提供你改好的段落.
My hometown is a pretty city,so people there are kind and polite.With coming of spring,grass and trees turn green,and flowers grew in many colors.In summer,the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.After autumn arrives,the city looks as an old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter,a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can wait more patiently above the sea for quite a longtime.While they find fish come to the surface,they fly down immediate and catch them without delay.That is my city,and I love it so much.
My hometown is a pretty city,so（so 改成and,加 the,前后无因果关系,名词前要定冠词the） people there are kind and polite.With(the) coming of spring,grass and trees turn green,and flowers grew（grew 改成 grow,时态一致） in many colors.In summer,the sea under the blue skies（skies 改成 sky） is even more beautiful.After(after 改成 when) autumn arrives,the city looks as(as 改成 like) an old man with leaves fallen(fallen 改成 falling) from the trees.In winter,a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can wait more(去掉more 没有比较关系) patiently above（above 改成 beside） the sea for quite a longtime.While(while 改成 when 或者 once) they find fishes come to the surface,they fly down immediately and catch them without delay.That is my city,and I love it so much.
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