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帮忙评一下分（30）并修改,高中英语作文
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括：1.时间：周五晚八点至九点
2,地点：学生俱乐部
3,内容：生日歌,蛋糕,游戏
Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming' birthday(开头已给出）
I’m writing to invite you to the party.And there is something significant you should know:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday.It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour.Besides,it will include singing berthday song,eat cake,as well as playing game.We hope that you will accept our invitation and carry a present if it is convenient for you.
You're welcome to come to the great ball.
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括：1.时间：周五晚八点至九点
2,地点：学生俱乐部
3,内容：生日歌,蛋糕,游戏
Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming' birthday(开头已给出）
I’m writing to invite you to the party.And there is something significant you should know:to The party is be held in Students' Club on Friday.It will start at 8:00 pm and last for about an hour.Besides,it will include singing berthday song,eat cake,as well as playing game.We hope that you will accept our invitation and carry a present if it is convenient for you.
You're welcome to come to the great ball.
1,there are some things which I think important .我觉得用should语气重了.
,2,eating cake,playing games.
3,带礼物这种事情,提出要求怪怪的,不过,也还好吧.
4,ball?会不会不合适啊?
5,结尾要署名哦.
恩,照我的高中记忆,还是不错的文章了,也看老师严不严.23到27分都有可能吧.
,2,eating cake,playing games.
3,带礼物这种事情,提出要求怪怪的,不过,也还好吧.
4,ball?会不会不合适啊?
5,结尾要署名哦.
恩,照我的高中记忆,还是不错的文章了,也看老师严不严.23到27分都有可能吧.