检查一下有没有错误阿...英语的...
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检查一下有没有错误阿...英语的...
帮我检查一下有没有什么语法的错误阿...
On the may day holiday i gave 7 days off,one day i went to the Songjiang Sheshan Natural Botanical Garden.There i saw many high bamboos in a row.The green bamboo forest gave me a nice feeling.Stand on the Sheshan,i felt excited as if i stand on the top of Mount Qomolangma.After we spent the whole morning at Sheshan,we all felt terribly tired.So we went home.
帮我检查一下有没有什么语法的错误阿...
On the may day holiday i gave 7 days off,one day i went to the Songjiang Sheshan Natural Botanical Garden.There i saw many high bamboos in a row.The green bamboo forest gave me a nice feeling.Stand on the Sheshan,i felt excited as if i stand on the top of Mount Qomolangma.After we spent the whole morning at Sheshan,we all felt terribly tired.So we went home.
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you shoud use"During"instead of "on".not i gave,it shoud be"i was given"or "i took 7 days off".not "in a row",shoud be "in rows".i think your english is good.