这篇文章有什么不对的地方?·``~`
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这篇文章有什么不对的地方?·``~`
Dear mother:
How are you?Winter vacation began,I want to make a timetable.It would make my life more interesting.I'd like to go with you to make a snowman、 Outing...I want to feel relaxed,so my mother,for our holiday please don't give me a lot of pressure,too many tasks.I just want to relax.The New Year is coming,2011 started a new life also began,hope is coming,let us get rid of 2010 troubles,together go to meet the 2011!Hope you have a happy New Year!Mom,I love you forever!
Dear mother:
How are you?Winter vacation began,I want to make a timetable.It would make my life more interesting.I'd like to go with you to make a snowman、 Outing...I want to feel relaxed,so my mother,for our holiday please don't give me a lot of pressure,too many tasks.I just want to relax.The New Year is coming,2011 started a new life also began,hope is coming,let us get rid of 2010 troubles,together go to meet the 2011!Hope you have a happy New Year!Mom,I love you forever!
Dear mother:
How's it going?As winter vacation has begun,I want to make a plan.It would make my life more interesting.I'd like to go outing with you and make a snowman.I want to get relaxed.Therefore,mom,please don't exert too much pressure on me so that we could enjoy a happy vacation.Too many tasks only lead to boring days.I just want to relax.
The New Year is coming.Bring new hopes,the year of 2011 has started and a new life has also begun.Let's get rid of all the troubles in the year of 2010.Let's get together to say hello to 2011,a bright new year!
Hope you enjoy a happy New Year,Mom.I love you forever!
原文存在一些语法错误和不太规范的表达,这里都予以了更正.当然了,对于一些没有什么太大问题的部分我也给予了一些修改,主要是为了整体连贯性.
如果有什么疑问,欢迎pm我,很乐意为你解答问题.
How's it going?As winter vacation has begun,I want to make a plan.It would make my life more interesting.I'd like to go outing with you and make a snowman.I want to get relaxed.Therefore,mom,please don't exert too much pressure on me so that we could enjoy a happy vacation.Too many tasks only lead to boring days.I just want to relax.
The New Year is coming.Bring new hopes,the year of 2011 has started and a new life has also begun.Let's get rid of all the troubles in the year of 2010.Let's get together to say hello to 2011,a bright new year!
Hope you enjoy a happy New Year,Mom.I love you forever!
原文存在一些语法错误和不太规范的表达,这里都予以了更正.当然了,对于一些没有什么太大问题的部分我也给予了一些修改,主要是为了整体连贯性.
如果有什么疑问,欢迎pm我,很乐意为你解答问题.
这篇文章有什么不对的地方?·``~`
有什么不对的地方吗
麻烦懂文言文的高手帮忙把这篇文章修改一下,看有什么不对的地方,(本人菜鸟)尽量修改的更复杂专业
麻烦懂文言文的高手把这篇文章改一下,看有什么不对的地方,(本人菜鸟)尽量修改的更复杂专业
这段英文有没有什么不对的地方啊
看一下这道题有什么不对的地方
看看英语有没有不对的地方.
这篇文章有没有错的地方
拜托大家帮我数一下这篇文章的字数,并告诉我这篇文章有什么需要修改的地方,
大家帮我看看我的英文简历 写的有什么不对的地方
高手进来帮我检查一下这段英语有没有什么语法不对的地方,
Don't worry.There is little time left.这句话有什么不对的地方?