搜狗做题网帮忙修改一下我错误的英文文法~
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帮忙修改一下我错误的英文文法~
我要交功课的英文story~帮忙伤改成正确的文法~
When I was open my eyes,I know that who was standing before me.Because my brain shows that they are names and our relationship.They called father mother and brother,John.
A days later,they are very cordial to me,it look like are real family,but I know that I never the same with them,since I am robot.Although I appearance is look like the human,but I am no had heart,didn’t know what feeling of human,so I am especially exist in this family.
I remember that,I once asked a very stupid problem,‘Why did you make me into the world?’ I looked at mother’s eyes to asked.
She looked at my eyes too.‘Don’t mind that you are robot,your here is true,we are real family.’ Her hand was put on my left chest and said.During days later,I have been feeling that I begin to change.
They are love to make me know,I am not especially exist,I am their family.
But good times didn’t last long,gentle mother appeared the white hair,a strong father is begin weak,and even accompanied my elder brother will have to marry too,but only me didn’t have any changes.
Afterwards,my premonition occurred,my parents passed away one after another.I learned to shed tears.
After that,I left the family,because I didn’t want to sad again.I have found for the family of the robot,and I lived in here.
Now I have robot family,sometimes I will go to visits John and his son.My lives was very happily.
我要交功课的英文story~帮忙伤改成正确的文法~
When I was open my eyes,I know that who was standing before me.Because my brain shows that they are names and our relationship.They called father mother and brother,John.
A days later,they are very cordial to me,it look like are real family,but I know that I never the same with them,since I am robot.Although I appearance is look like the human,but I am no had heart,didn’t know what feeling of human,so I am especially exist in this family.
I remember that,I once asked a very stupid problem,‘Why did you make me into the world?’ I looked at mother’s eyes to asked.
She looked at my eyes too.‘Don’t mind that you are robot,your here is true,we are real family.’ Her hand was put on my left chest and said.During days later,I have been feeling that I begin to change.
They are love to make me know,I am not especially exist,I am their family.
But good times didn’t last long,gentle mother appeared the white hair,a strong father is begin weak,and even accompanied my elder brother will have to marry too,but only me didn’t have any changes.
Afterwards,my premonition occurred,my parents passed away one after another.I learned to shed tears.
After that,I left the family,because I didn’t want to sad again.I have found for the family of the robot,and I lived in here.
Now I have robot family,sometimes I will go to visits John and his son.My lives was very happily.
When I OPENED my eyes,I know who was standing IN FRONT OF me,because my brain shows theIR names and our relationshipS.They called father,mother,and brother,John.
A COUPLE days later,they are very cordial to me.WE look like A real family,but I know that I AM never the same COMPARE TO them,since I am robot.Although MY appearance IS like human,I had NO heartS.I didn’t know THE feeling of human,so I exist SPECIALLY in this family.
I remember that I once asked a very stupid QUESTION,"Why did you BRING me TO THIS world?" I looked INTO mother’s eyes AND asked.
She looked INTO my eyes too,‘Don’t mind that you are robot.IT'S TRUE THAT YOU'RE HERE.We are real family.’ SHE SAID WITH her hand on my left chest.During THE FOLLOWING days,I FELT that I AM beginNING to change.
THEIR love make me know,I am not existED SPECIALLY; I am their family.
But good times didn’t last long.Gentle mother appeared WITH the white hair; a strong father is beginNING TO BECOME weak; even my elder brother WHO HAD ALWAYS ACCOMPANIED BY ME IS GOING TO BE MARRIED,too.I AM THE ONLY ONE WHO didn’t change.
Afterwards,my premonition occurred.My parents passed away one after another.I learned to shed tears.
After that,I left the family,because I didn’t want to BE sad again.I have found the family of the robot,and I lived THERE.
Now I have robot family.Sometimes I will go to VISIT John and his son.My LIFE was very HAPPY.(I LIVED HAPPILY)
注:搞清THERE,THEIR,THEY'RE的区别...
用我的和你的对比,就能看出区别了...
故事不错...
A COUPLE days later,they are very cordial to me.WE look like A real family,but I know that I AM never the same COMPARE TO them,since I am robot.Although MY appearance IS like human,I had NO heartS.I didn’t know THE feeling of human,so I exist SPECIALLY in this family.
I remember that I once asked a very stupid QUESTION,"Why did you BRING me TO THIS world?" I looked INTO mother’s eyes AND asked.
She looked INTO my eyes too,‘Don’t mind that you are robot.IT'S TRUE THAT YOU'RE HERE.We are real family.’ SHE SAID WITH her hand on my left chest.During THE FOLLOWING days,I FELT that I AM beginNING to change.
THEIR love make me know,I am not existED SPECIALLY; I am their family.
But good times didn’t last long.Gentle mother appeared WITH the white hair; a strong father is beginNING TO BECOME weak; even my elder brother WHO HAD ALWAYS ACCOMPANIED BY ME IS GOING TO BE MARRIED,too.I AM THE ONLY ONE WHO didn’t change.
Afterwards,my premonition occurred.My parents passed away one after another.I learned to shed tears.
After that,I left the family,because I didn’t want to BE sad again.I have found the family of the robot,and I lived THERE.
Now I have robot family.Sometimes I will go to VISIT John and his son.My LIFE was very HAPPY.(I LIVED HAPPILY)
注:搞清THERE,THEIR,THEY'RE的区别...
用我的和你的对比,就能看出区别了...
故事不错...